For page 1: Try stroking the text at the bottom. Trust me, it'll look nicer.
[Side note: Something about that font you use (above) is making me uneasy. Don't worry, must be my dislike.]
For page 2: Noizy's standard font for typesetting is Wild Words. The side text ("Rookies VS Marines") -- have you stroke it or not? It should be stroked. And the text must cover the poorly cloned parts.
Well, other than those things I mentioned above, you did well. We're picking up OP, and I hope you'll get hired as a typesetter. That lessen my burdens, you know. Seriously.
I'm looking forward to it.
