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1 aspiring proofreader here on Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:08 pm

crispydonut


Super Newbie
yepp, that's me ><

would someone send me the test and i'll get back to you ASAP.

that is if there're still slots Very Happy

2 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:21 pm

Taka-sama


Administrator
Administrator
Well, slots are always available... BRB XD

3 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Wed Jun 25, 2008 9:53 am

crispydonut


Super Newbie
kays! i shall wait.

4 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Wed Jun 25, 2008 11:44 am

Taka-sama


Administrator
Administrator
Ok here's the test

Spoiler:

page 1
elsee:Ka-Kamisama!!! // Kanon Chan has disappeared! // even though she is here just now
keima:stay calm.Can they do such gimic in real life!? // look carefully
[Words on bottom left: Kanon Chan suddenly disappear!! What is really happening]
[words bottom right:this story is a fiction.it has nothing to do with real life*bla bla bla....just ignore it*]
[bottom: the world god only knows]

page 2
[top:Life for you! capturing Idol just for you Part 3]
[infront of kanon: top Idol's broken heart/ I'm disapearing ! / disaperaring!?]
[big kanji: wakaki tamiki]
[bottom:I'm a commoner?]

page 3
elsee: are.. re.... there she is
keima: its kinda visable isnt it?
kanon: no... no....// no one listen to my songs
[just like that time]
girl:eh? you are here?
[just like that time]
teacher:I check it carefuly though/ who would thought I would forget your contact details. // sorry
kanon:nothing is changed // I'm still invisible
[text at the left:story so far:to capture the evil soul of evil people(spirits) that lies in the broken heart of a girl, katsuragi keima must get a kiss filled with love from that girl. The girl for this time is Nishihara Kanon, National Top Idol.But she, for some reason has a big broken heart!?]

page 4
[I got it]
keima: no you're wrong // I listen to your song whole heartedly!! // URGH!!
Kanon:you're sleeping.....
keima:sleeping....erm....

page 5
Keita:it's wonderfully sung..... // as if I'm in heaven // I...I survive
elsee: kami-sama.... are you allright??

page 6
elsee: kanon chan is iritated / because kami-sama always ignore her
keima:I'm not do it because I like it // I do it just to understand her problem.I'm shaking you know.
elsee: so you go that far just to understand her problem?
keima: OF COURSE!! // you cant start capturing if you dont know her problem
[problems is our caracter.get it even if you have to sell your organs][sign:keima]
elsee:story of the game isnt it...

page 7
keima: its ok...I'm going to follow till the end even if she gives her bad impression
elsee: follow?
keima: if the problem already start, we already capture 50% of it // from now on I go see her more often....
elsee: even you said so / It's not easy to meet kanon chan
keima: and then // we need someone to understand her problems and just wish the other things went well.
elsee:?
pfp:it's mail! // it's mail
[screen: one mail recived]

page 8
[box:narusawa TV]
[box:First floor lobby]
keima:(sh..she still sad) // (or rather than that, she is transparent./ is it caused by the spirits!?)
kanon: this is keima kun's mail adress // he put it secrectly into my coat.....

page 9
kanon: I'm a comonner, am I....// did my song // reached you
keima: a..aaa... // it's a great song...

page 10
kanon:really!? // ahh, thank god! / I cannot work before because of that // oh..no. it's been a while // I cant stay calm a little.

page 11
keima: (that is a little?)
kanon: tihs CD's seal // you make it carefully is't it? // erm // can we change mails after this..... // I... don't have friends at school..../ you are the first person I talked to.
keima: talked, huh....
[Usually I would say yes, but]
[what is this bad feeeling]
pfp: its mail!

page 12
[words on screen:pleaase take care of me*multiplied*]
kanon: Please take care of me
pfp: it's mail!
Kanon: sorry to call you / there is someting that makes me feel uneasy
pfp:it's mail!

page 13
kanon: the recording is failed // I cannot swim. if I fall from the stage... // my bed hair wont go straight.
[box:Kanon chan call me...]
[box:36 times in a day...]
pfp: it's mail! // it's mail! // its mail!
[box: several days later]
elsee: kami-sama please hold yourself
kanon: keima kun // here here!!

page 14
keima: eh, she don't seems to feel down
kanon:keima kun // today I going to do a great live performence // about 10 000 people will come / this is the first time I perform in such a big place. // gr.. great isn't it.
keima: eh, thanks for telling that
kanon: it just like a dream... // people will come just to see me
[I got nothing's worth]
[no one wants to be friends with me even though I'm there]
kanon: I'm not // a commoner anymore

page 15
keima: do as you wish
kanon:ah.. you always playing the game!! // did you hear me!?
keima: I hear you...
kanon: geez,even though I want to give you a look at my... / costumes..... // ah!! // My song!! // then // then
keima: ahh!?
kanon: keima kun listen to my songs....
keima: st..stop it. it.. its a preparation, preparation...
kanon: what preparation?

page 16
kanon: Is my songs good? // if it does, praise me // praise me, praise me
[TN: I see boobs there! sigh... wish it was bigger XD]

page 17
kanon: see you!
elsee: as expected kami-sama // the plan flow is perfect isnt it.// geez..with head pat ah..I mean //she is as happy as being kissed.// the emptiness in her broken heart must be filled already.
[no, there is one thing missing]

page 18
woman:find her
man: kanon chan isn't here!! // she is missing!!
[text on the right:the last capturing event is....surely, kamisama's mispredict!?]
elsee:eh!? it cant be!
[here it comes]
[I can see the ending!!]
[bottom: continue in mag no 29]


Looking forward to the result ^_^

5 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Thu Jun 26, 2008 1:41 pm

Kenji_37


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I see some kind of teasing here.....XD



6 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Thu Jun 26, 2008 1:42 pm

crispydonut


Super Newbie
Spoiler:

page 1
elsee: Ka-Kamisama!!! // Kanon-chan has disappeared! // even though she is <was> here just now…
keima: stay calm <calm down>. Can they do such a gimic <gimmick> in real life!? <?!> // look carefully
[Words on bottom left: Kanon-chan suddenly disappeared!! What is really happening?]
[Words bottom right: this story is a fiction. it has nothing to do with real life *bla bla bla....just ignore it*]
[bottom: the world god only <only God> knows]

page 2
[top: The life for you! capturing Idol just for you Part 3]
[in front of kanon: top Idol's broken heart/ I'm disapearing <disappearing> ! disaperaring <disappearing>!?]
[big kanji: wakaki tamiki]
[bottom:I'm a commoner?]

page 3
elsee: are.. re.... there she is
keima: it's kinda visable <visible> isn’t it?
kanon: no... no....// no one listens to my songs
[just like that time]
girl: eh? you are <you’re> here?
[just like that time]
teacher: I checked it carefuly <carefully> though/ who would have thought I would forget your contact details. // sorry
kanon: nothing is changed // I'm still invisible
[text at the left: story so far: to capture the evil souls of evil spirits that lies in the broken heart of a girl, katsuragi keima must get a kiss filled with love from that girl. The girl for this time is Nishihara Kanon, National Top Idol. But she, for some reason, has a big broken heart!?]

page 4
[I got it]
keima: no you're wrong // I listened to your song whole heartedly <wholeheartedly>!! // URGH!!
Kanon: you're sleeping.....
keima: sleeping....erm....

page 5
Keita: it's wonderfully sung..... // as if I'm in heaven // I...I will survive
elsee: kami-sama.... are you allright <all right>??

page 6
elsee: kanon-chan is iritated <irritated>/ because kami-sama always ignores her
keima: I'm not <I don’t> do it because I like it // I’m doing it just to understand her problem. I'm shaking you know.
elsee: so you’ll go that far just to understand her problem?
keima: OF COURSE!! // you can’t start capturing if you don’t know her problem
[problems is <are> our caracter <characters> .get it even if you have to sell your organs][sign:keima]
elsee: it’s the story of the game, isn’t it...

page 7
keima: its ok...I'm going to follow her till <to> the end even if she gives her <a> bad impression
elsee: follow?
keima: if the problem has already started, we already captured 50% of it // from now on I’ll go see her more often....
elsee: even if you said <say> so / It's not easy to meet kanon-chan
keima: and then // we’ll need someone to understand her problems and just wish <hope> the other things went <will go> well.
elsee:?
pfp: it's mail! // it's mail![screen: one mail recived <received>]

page 8
[box: narusawa TV]
[box: First floor lobby]
keima:(sh..she’s still sad) // (or rather <more> than that, she is <she’s> transparent./ is it caused by the spirits!?)
kanon: this is keima-kun's mail adress <address> // he put it secrectly <secretly> into my coat.....

page 9
kanon: I'm a comonner <commoner>, am I....// did my song // reached you
keima: a..aaa... // it's a great song...

page 10
kanon: really!? // ahh, thank god! / I cannot <could not> work before because of that // oh..no. it's been a while // I can’t stay calm a little <at all>.

page 11
keima: (that is a little?)
kanon: tihs <this> CD's seal // you make <made> it carefully is't it <right>? // erm // can we exchange mails addresses after this..... // I... don't have friends at school..../ you are the first person I talked to.
keima: talked, huh....
[Usually I would say yes, but…]
[what is this bad feeeling <feeling>]
pfp: it’s mail!

page 12
[words on screen: pleaase <please> take care of me*multiplied*]
kanon: Please take care of me
pfp: it's mail!
Kanon: sorry to call you / there is someting <something> that makes me feel uneasy
pfp: it's mail!

page 13
kanon: the recording is <has> failed // I cannot swim. if I fall from the stage... // my bed <bad> hair won’t go <get> straight.
[box: Kanon-chan call me...]
[box: 36 times in a day...]
pfp: it's mail! // it's mail! // its mail!
[box: several days later]
elsee: kami-sama please hold yourself together!
kanon: keima-kun // here, here!!

page 14
keima: eh, she don't <doesn’t> seems to feel <be> down
kanon: keima-kun // today I’m going to do a great live performence <performance>// about 10 000 people will come / this is <will be> the first time I perform in such a big place. // gr.. great isn't it?keima: eh, thanks for telling me that
kanon: it’s just like a dream... // people will come just to see me
[I got nothing's worth] <nothing is worth more than this>
[no one wants to be friends with me even though I'm there]
kanon: I'm not // a commoner anymore

page 15
keima: do as you wish
kanon: ah.. you’re always playing the <a> game!! // did <do> you hear me!?
keima: I hear you...
kanon: geez, even though I wanted to give <let> you have a look at my... / costumes..... // ah!! // My song!! // then // then
keima: ahh!?
kanon: keima-kun, listen to my songs....
keima: st..stop it. it.. it’s a preparation, preparation...
kanon: what preparation?

page 16
kanon: Is <are> my songs good? // if it does <they are>, praise me // praise me, praise me
[TN: I see boobs there! sigh... wish it was <they were> bigger XD]

page 17
kanon: see you!
elsee: as expected kami-sama // the plan flow is perfect isnt it <the plan is flowing perfectly, isn't it>.// geez..with a head pat <pat on the head> ah..I mean //she is as happy as being kissed.// the emptiness in her broken heart must be filled already.
[no, there is one thing still missing]

page 18
woman: find her
man: kanon-chan isn't here!! // she is missing!!
[text on the right: the last capturing event is....surely, kami-sama's mispredict (there’s no such word) <miscalculated> !? (or it could be <kami-sama’s miscalculation>. ) elsee: eh!? it cant be!
[here it comes]
[I can see the ending!!]
[bottom: continue in mag no 29]


okay! im done. red's the mistakes and the corrections are beside in <>. orange are the words i put in as corrections.

i havent read this manga before so im not sure of the storyline. forgive me if i made my own mistakes.

i hope i did ok =D will be waiting for the results!

7 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Thu Jun 26, 2008 1:45 pm

Kenji_37


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Gender:Female
thanks.... our BEST proofreaders will check it.... hope you will pass...



8 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Thu Jun 26, 2008 1:51 pm

crispydonut


Super Newbie
arigato for you time =]

9 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Thu Jun 26, 2008 1:55 pm

mayumeca1563


Senior Noizy
Senior Noizy
I'll try checking this one

10 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:01 pm

mayumeca1563


Senior Noizy
Senior Noizy
I can say pass actually this proofread was better than the proofread of the released one though some notable mistakes:

The "As if I'm in heaven need"s to be changed a little I think like "I felt like I was in heaven"
and also the "I will survive" that was supposed to be "I survived" but the second one was an understandable mistake you didn't have the raws. And yeah just next time don't be afraid to change the words if you think they're wrong since I kinda think you tru to stick with the words written too much and that's all I sound stupid sorry XD but you pass definitely for me

11 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:14 pm

juon


Administrator
Administrator
Okay I think you ready! congrats

12 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Thu Jun 26, 2008 7:19 pm

crispydonut


Super Newbie
haha, omg, thank you.

looking forward to working with you all! xDD

13 Re: aspiring proofreader here on Fri Jun 27, 2008 9:01 am

crispydonut


Super Newbie
just PM me if you need anything. arigato =D oh, and hey, my malay isnt that bad (im from m'sia) so if that ever comes in handy, tell me!

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