page 1
elsee: Ka-Kamisama!!! // Kanon-chan has disappeared! // even though she
is <was> here just now…
keima:
stay calm <calm down>. Can they do such
a gimic <gimmick> in real life!?
<?!> // look carefully
[Words on bottom left: Kanon-chan suddenly disappear
ed!! What is really happening
?]
[Words bottom right: this story is a fiction. it has nothing to do with real life *bla bla bla....just ignore it*]
[bottom: the world
god only <only God> knows]
page 2
[top:
The life for you! capturing Idol just for you Part 3]
[in front of kanon: top Idol's broken heart/ I'm
disapearing <disappearing> !
disaperaring <disappearing>!?]
[big kanji: wakaki tamiki]
[bottom:I'm a commoner?]
page 3
elsee: are.. re.... there she is
keima: it
's kinda
visable <visible> isn’t it?
kanon: no... no....// no one listen
s to my songs
[just like that time]
girl: eh?
you are <you’re> here?
[just like that time]
teacher: I check
ed it
carefuly <carefully> though/ who would
have thought I would forget your contact details. // sorry
kanon: nothing is changed // I'm still invisible
[text at the left: story so far: to capture the evil soul
s of evil spirits that lie
s in the broken heart of a girl, katsuragi keima must get a kiss filled with love from that girl. The girl for this time is Nishihara Kanon, National Top Idol. But she, for some reason, has a big broken heart!?]
page 4
[I got it]
keima: no you're wrong // I listen
ed to your song
whole heartedly <wholeheartedly>!! // URGH!!
Kanon: you're sleeping.....
keima: sleeping....erm....
page 5
Keita: it's wonderfully sung..... // as if I'm in heaven // I...I
will survive
elsee: kami-sama.... are you
allright <all right>??
page 6
elsee: kanon-chan is
iritated <irritated>/ because kami-sama always ignore
s her
keima:
I'm not <I don’t> do it because I like it // I
’m do
ing it just to understand her problem. I'm shaking you know.
elsee: so you
’ll go that far just to understand her problem?
keima: OF COURSE!! // you can’t start capturing if you don’t know her problem
[problems
is <are> our
caracter <characters> .get it even if you have to sell your organs][sign:keima]
elsee:
it’s the story of the game
, isn’t it...
page 7
keima: its ok...I'm going to follow
her till <to> the end even if she gives
her <a> bad impression
elsee: follow?
keima: if the problem
has already start
ed, we already capture
d 50% of it // from now on I
’ll go see her more often....
elsee: even
if you
said <say> so / It's not easy to meet kanon-chan
keima: and then // we’ll need someone to understand her problems and just
wish <hope> the other things
went <will go> well.
elsee:?
pfp: it's mail! // it's mail
![screen: one mail
recived <received>]
page 8
[box: narusawa TV]
[box: First floor lobby]
keima:(sh..she
’s still sad) // (or
rather <more> than that,
she is <she’s> transparent./ is it caused by the spirits!?)
kanon: this is keima-kun's mail
adress <address> // he put it
secrectly <secretly> into my coat.....
page 9
kanon: I'm a
comonner <commoner>, am I....// did my song // reach
ed you
keima: a..aaa... // it's a great song...
page 10
kanon: really!? // ahh, thank god! / I
cannot <could not> work before because of that // oh..no. it's been a while // I can’t stay calm
a little <at all>.
page 11
keima: (that is a little?)
kanon:
tihs <this> CD's seal // you
make <made> it carefully
is't it <right>? // erm // can we
exchange mail
s addresses after this..... // I... don't have friends at school..../ you are the first person I talked to.
keima: talked, huh....
[Usually I would say yes, but…]
[what is this bad
feeeling <feeling>]
pfp: it’s mail!
page 12
[words on screen:
pleaase <please> take care of me*multiplied*]
kanon: Please take care of me
pfp: it's mail!
Kanon: sorry to call you / there is
someting <something> that makes me feel uneasy
pfp: it's mail!
page 13
kanon: the recording
is <has> failed // I cannot swim. if I fall from the stage... // my
bed <bad> hair won’t
go <get> straight.
[box: Kanon-chan call me...]
[box: 36 times in a day...]
pfp: it's mail! // it's mail! // its mail!
[box: several days later]
elsee: kami-sama please hold yourself
together!
kanon: keima-kun // here
, here!!
page 14
keima: eh, she
don't <doesn’t> seem
s to
feel <be> down
kanon: keima-kun // today I
’m going to do a great live
performence <performance>// about 10 000 people will come / this
is <will be> the first time I perform in such a big place. // gr.. great isn't it
?keima: eh, thanks for telling
me that
kanon: it
’s just like a dream... // people will come just to see me
[
I got nothing's worth] <nothing is worth more than this>
[no one wants to be friends with me even though I'm there]
kanon: I'm not // a commoner anymore
page 15
keima: do as you wish
kanon: ah.. you
’re always playing
the <a> game!! //
did <do> you hear me!?
keima: I hear you...
kanon: geez, even though I want
ed to
give <let> you
have a look at my... / costumes..... // ah!! // My song!! // then // then
keima: ahh!?
kanon: keima-kun, listen to my songs....
keima: st..stop it. it.. it’s a preparation, preparation...
kanon: what preparation?
page 16
kanon:
Is <are> my songs good? // if
it does <they are>, praise me // praise me, praise me
[TN: I see boobs there! sigh... wish
it was <they were> bigger XD]
page 17
kanon: see you!
elsee: as expected kami-sama //
the plan flow is perfect isnt it <the plan is flowing perfectly, isn't it>.// geez..with
a head pat <pat on the head> ah..I mean //she is as happy as being kissed.// the emptiness in her broken heart must be filled already.
[no, there is one thing
still missing]
page 18
woman: find her
man: kanon-chan isn't here!! // she is missing!!
[text on the right: the last capturing event is....surely, kami-sama
's mispredict (there’s no such word) <miscalculated> !?
(or it could be <kami-sama’s miscalculation>. ) elsee: eh!? it cant be!
[here it comes]
[I can see the ending!!]
[bottom: continue in mag no 29]
aspiring proofreader here on Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:08 pm
